Tuesday, 7 February 2017

Storytelling & Commission: Script Draft

1 comment:

  1. Hi Zoe - okay - my first impression is that you could cut a lot of the Elf's 'reaction' dialogue, because it will be obvious to the audience that he is frustrated - as this will be coming through his performance and also through the sum total of the scenario he is in. Obviously you need the response of the admin on the phone, but try and minimise the dialogue - and only use it when completely necessary - I think this will add up to something funnier and pacier too.